Editing

The editing has gone well so fare. We have been able to use most of our original footage effectively, to create our original idea we all had. We were able to create the eerie and intense atmosphere by using different effects on Final Cut Express. We added " viewfinder" on the hand held memory shots, to give the idea of a relationship and mystery. We also desaturated the memory shots in order to make clear the difference between the memory shots and the flash shots. We also did this to establish that these shots are memories, in the past. Other than these shots we did not add any other filters.

Feed Back

Editing:
Positive - Liked they was it flashed around and kept it uneven.
- Good use of editing. We liked the "record" in the top left on the establishing
shot.
Negative - Flashes could be faster, rapid and more intense.
- Would benefit from more variety of shots.
- Shorten clips e.g. when the character is waiting to have leaves put on her.

Camera work:
Positive - The video camera shots are very effective.
- Great beginning, video camera looks really good and helps create atmosphere.
- Good emotion when she is captured.
- Great range of shots.
Negative - It could be really effective if u changed the tone of it e.g. Sepia or
Black and White
- Try to keep people out of the shots.
- maybe there should be more close ups to add to variety

Sound :
Positive - Like the screech sound.
- Screeching helps make it clearer as to whats happening.
- Sound is good.
- Nice and freaky.
Negative - sound in "in flashes" need to be screechier and loud.
-Could vary the sound a little more.

Mise en scene:
Positive - Very playful and innocent - childhood memories. Relates to thriller convention of making a safe place unsafe.
- Bright, colorful and contrasting.
- Love her dress.
- Good setting because it starts happy but is easy to imagine it turning more morbid.
Negative - It could be in Black and White?
-Maybe you could add a crackling effect or distort the footage.

Narrative:
Positive - Sense of innocence and lots of it is established nicely.
- Its great.
- Pretty easy to follow. Quite simple, but very effective.
Negative - Ending is Unsure.... what is going on, where do the titles go?

Credit list

A Bhambees production presents

A Goodfellow film

Ofelia Marcs

Adam Galbraith

Harry Hotchkiss

Costume Design by Bryony Phillipe

Art direction by Tom Rupert

Production design by Jacques Rory

Casting by Carla St John

Film Editing by Justin Bavalia

Cinematography by Jude McGrellis

Original music by Christian Morrow

Produced by Elijah Fenn

Directed by Peter Goodfellow

( Red text = credits being used)

Shot List

1. Mid shot / low angle - spinning, having fun.

2. Close up - extreme close up of eye.

3. Mid shot - leaves being thrown in the air.

4. Close up - leaves being thrown in the air.

5. Close up - head turning around, looking at the camera.

6. Mid shot - hiding behind a tree (happy).

7. Close up - girl facing camera, mans hand placed over her mouth.

8. Close up - girl lying on floor, camera facing above her.

9. Extreme close up - mans hand on girls arm.

10. Mid shot - girl walking along from left to right.

11. Close up - man's, "killer's" eyes.

12. Mid/ long shot - walking around the woods.

Animatic

Initial Ideas

We have came up with lots of different initial ideas. one was that we would use the flickering quick shot effect which is used in "surface" to create an atmospheric eeriness to it. Also we wanted the sequence to start off nice, welcoming and happy but then gradually it would twist into a more creepy and slightly scary selection of shots, like a montage.

We can up with other plot ideas, the first was that we would all act in the performance as four smartly dressed business woman, who would wair inappropriately high heels and bright red lipstick. The entirety of the sequence would be in black and white but with only the lipstick in colour, we would do this using special FX.

The other idea that we have come up with is to have a teenage girl, approximatly our age, that goes missing and then later dies. We would have a montage of images to show her having fun in life and then would finish with the effect from 'surface' building up to someones eyes suddenly opening, as if reminiscing. This would be a boyfriend, that killed her, or a parent sitting in a room full of people having a press conference relating their "missing" daughter.

Student Example

We have chosen 'Surface' as our student example because we like the way they manipulated the images buy filming them then playing them on the television and filming them again, it created a flickering effect which was quite spooky and worked well with the eerie tone of the sequence.

Understanding of thriller conventions: They created fear through the rapid shots and flickering shots, not letting the viewer see exactly what is happening which builds tension and creates suspense.

Understanding of the opening sequence structure: The structure is clever as the audience only see the action shots briefly in between the "blood" shots, where they have used food dye to create a blood effect when poured into water and then slowed down. These shots alturnate until the end, where a combination of extremely short shots are put together over dramatic music, progessing to the end where we finally have the film title appear.

Mise - en - scene: Mise - en - scene is used well as the lighting on the blood is dark but not too dark that we can hardly see it. The lighting in the short action shots is dim also but when set to black and white the contrast in colours work well and effectively to create atmosphere. There are no defined props in this sequence, neither are there any special costumes as we can only see the characters briefly from the shoulders up and it is in black and white, and therefore costumes are not such a necessity.

Camera work and Framing: The camera work is obviously hand held in the action shots, to portray the sense of suspense. A tripod is used for the blood shots.

SoundThe sound used in these titles are both diagetic and non diagetic. The diagetic sound that they used was in the action shots, of the girl gasping and crying. The non diagetic sound was used in the blood shots, of tension building music.

EditingThis sequence was edited very cleverly as the blood shot leaves the audience question how it was done, you can not tell that they used food dye in a glass against a dark background. The action shots where done using a hand held camera setting and eerie atmosphere, putting the audience in the same frame of mind as the characters, at unease and not knowing what is happening, again asking questions. At the end of the sequence they uploaded the footage onto a television and filmed it, which is what the lines across the screen are, they then uploaded this footage onto the computer and made the shots fast and close together.

Use of special FX

Introduction

Hello, our group has changed since our kids TV title sequence, It now includes, Bryony, Ella B, Ella S and Ana. We will all bring different qualities to the group; Ana is the editor and will be filming our footage. Ella B will also be filming and editing and will assist in creating the music in Garage Band. Ella S will be acting in the sequence and editing the sequence and Bryony will also be acting and editing.