Final Class review comments

- Gives a sense of mystery as to whats happening on screen it's also eerie.
- Sub genre = Voyeurism
- Murder mystery type thing, like midsummer murders but more stylish.
- Sounds adds to the eerie atmosphere. There is also a good use of editing as it coincides the story well.
- Looks professional.

- We do think it is obvious that it is a thriller but maybe more of a psychological thriller then scary.
- A stalker murder?
- Good use of mise - en - scene.
- Like the use of black and white shots.
- Titles could be a a little smaller.

- Soundtrack very good works well with sequence.
- Black and white. Mystery - thriller conventions.
- Find out more about the character?
- Good variety of camera shots + editing.
- "Rec" box looks good.

- Really good shots - really like the shots towards the end.
- Good editing - sped up towards the end.
- "Rec" Frame is good effect.

- Music - nice touch with the scary music.
- What happens in the rest of the film: Find out why shes being grabbed(?)
- Could maybe stick to one colour scheme (either b+w or colour).

Final

Editing

The editing has gone well so fare. We have been able to use most of our original footage effectively, to create our original idea we all had. We were able to create the eerie and intense atmosphere by using different effects on Final Cut Express. We added " viewfinder" on the hand held memory shots, to give the idea of a relationship and mystery. We also desaturated the memory shots in order to make clear the difference between the memory shots and the flash shots. We also did this to establish that these shots are memories, in the past. Other than these shots we did not add any other filters.